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Re: Illusion
Good connection for many teens! I know I'm guilty of taking my anger out on my pillow, muffling my crys. Bravo!
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: [currently untitled]
Waz that posed to be about the movie I Am Legand? It was good but that sorta ripped off the title, for you, cuz people might read it expecting something ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Remembering Exodus
Bravo! I am, myself, fascinated with the Holocaust. I really liked it.
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Purple
Well sorry girl. Someone asked me what the title was about so I answered their question. That was sorta uncalled for if you ask me, yeah and I just left ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: My Hair
lol cute. maybe i'll get dreadlocks now, naybe not. u kno. hey maybe i'll grow dreadlocks, never shower, and get pregnant. your poem has inspired me.
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Purple
You know? Like dang I thought purple was the most wonderful color, and so did someone else, really special to me, and now we're at a bad place in our ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Purple
Purple, something beautiful turning into your worst nightmare.
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Your deadly embrace
*Gaping still* Wow you are a very talented little soul. Keep up stuff like this and you'll have publishers licking your shoes. I LOVED it. I wish I could give ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Irises of Crimson
Mhm. I feel this is how my ex feels about me right now. Very good! I will definetly save and remember this one.
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: An Ode to Me
Dude that was pretty awesome. It was all concieted and fascist and big headed but you totally made it all good at the end. I really like you for some ...
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Boredom
Yeah this poem sucked. So how do you take stuff out of your portfolio cuz I HATE this poem and I want it gone.
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: High School Students
dude no one can tell anyone that something is not a poem. u guys are crazy. if it was written to be a poem, it's a poem, no matter what.
Apr 19, 2008 -
Re: That's all
To many I's. Good though. I liked it :)
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Dejection
IDK what Sumi was talking about because I really liked this poem! It's very discriptive and beautiful! Excellent job! -Ailam
Apr 17, 2008
